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I am not a Lazy Youth
A posse of fallacy-inventors they are;
Making sugar-coated promises;
They are but tricksters and swindlers—political crooks!
We are governed by scoundrels and crooks,
......
I look to the stars above, searching for the answers that have always been here
Hidden underneath the lies told by those with brittle hearts and evil souls masked with an ever-innocent smile
Looking to lead people astray
Fueled by their disappointment
Their sadness
Their fear of exploring the unknown
I will look to the stars for guidance and let their light shine on the path I should lead and cast shadows on those with ill intentions
Oh, you beloved reflex.....
not always constant...
gotta keep you there...
and it ain't easy but simple...
bringing you, comes with the bit dose of dopamine ......
and it ain't hard bringing you...
and how to forget the special...
resonant effect that comes with thou...
......
Once, I was passing by
an old post office about to die
and saw a dog who was shy
the dog made a very appealing cry,
from his little black glowing eyes
It was such a strange feeling...
was happy to have a friend like him
but sad for the person who left him
......
I look to the stars above, searching for the answers that have always been here
Hidden underneath the lies told by those with brittle hearts and evil souls masked with an ever-innocent smile
Looking to lead people astray
Fueled by their disappointment
Their sadness
Their fear of exploring the unknown
I will look to the stars for guidance and let their light shine on the path I should lead and cast shadows on those with ill intentions
Once, I was passing by
an old post office about to die
and saw a dog who was shy
the dog made a very appealing cry,
from his little black glowing eyes
It was such a strange feeling...
was happy to have a friend like him
but sad for the person who left him
......
Oh, you beloved reflex.....
not always constant...
gotta keep you there...
and it ain't easy but simple...
bringing you, comes with the bit dose of dopamine ......
and it ain't hard bringing you...
and how to forget the special...
resonant effect that comes with thou...
......
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You said - Thank you very much, Edward! I'm glad you like it! What did you think? Please Critique my poem if you want!
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I am not a Lazy Youth
A posse of fallacy-inventors they are;
Making sugar-coated promises;
They are but tricksters and swindlers—political crooks!
We are governed by scoundrels and crooks,
......