Metaphors Poems
Down the Dark Well (feedback please)
by Monica Ellis
I peered
past the perimeter
to see where it ended
Was there still water?
I circled
around the circumference
curious as a cat
I noticed
......
In This Moment.
by HIRAETH Mccombs
My lips are a barrier to a sick tongue,
Lies taste sweet, I can never get enough,
The truth is bitter, and It goes down tough,
My throat burns.
My thoughts take over the empty spaces,
And They find their way to the darkest places,
I can not even remember what today is, let alone what my name is,
Broken.
......
Down the Dark Well (feedback please)
by Monica Ellis
I peered
past the perimeter
to see where it ended
Was there still water?
I circled
around the circumference
curious as a cat
I noticed
......
In This Moment.
by HIRAETH Mccombs
My lips are a barrier to a sick tongue,
Lies taste sweet, I can never get enough,
The truth is bitter, and It goes down tough,
My throat burns.
My thoughts take over the empty spaces,
And They find their way to the darkest places,
I can not even remember what today is, let alone what my name is,
Broken.
......
